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How to write short business messages on WhatsApp

A simple pattern for clear business messages: greeting, one point, one action, thanks. With examples of good and poor messages and tips on tone and length.

A WhatsApp message is read on a small screen between other messages. The clearer it is, the more likely it gets a reply. A simple pattern works for almost every business message.

Greeting, point, action, thanks

  1. Greeting with the name. "Hello Priya," is warmer than "Dear customer".
  2. One point. What is this message about: an order, a bill, an appointment.
  3. One action. What do you want the person to do: pay, confirm, reply, visit.
  4. Thanks. A short thank-you ends it kindly.

Good and poor examples

PoorBetter
Pay now.Hello Raj, a gentle reminder that bill 142 for Rs 3,500 is due. Please pay by Friday. Thank you.
Your order is ready come take itHello Meena, your order is ready for collection. The shop is open till 8 pm today.
HiHello, I am Sunil from ____ Tailors. You asked about a blouse stitching quote. It is Rs 600. Shall I book it?

Tone

Be polite and friendly, not stiff. Avoid capital letters, many exclamation marks and long paragraphs. If the person is older, use a respectful form such as "ji" or "sir/madam" in the way your region does.

Check before you send

Read the message once as if you were the customer. Is the point clear? Is the action clear? Is there anything that sounds rude? Then send. Our ready templates already follow this pattern. Read also about timing and length.

Questions people ask

Should I send a voice note or text?

Send text for amounts, dates and addresses; people copy and search them. A voice note suits warm or long explanations.

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